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Fall Like Stars
By: Angela Amy

Lost in an ocean
Lost in the stars
Lost in the pain of my own prison

I can’t seem to wake
I’m running away
I’m far too gone to seek redemption

We’ll burn as we fall
Fall like stars
Shadows of ourselves
Lost where we are
I got ghosts in my pasts
Got nightmares now
We’ll burn as we fall
We’re not saved anyhow

I can’t seem to fight
Got nowhere to run
Crushed my hopes of life escaping

I want to fly
Just get away
Search for the piece that seems forsaken

We’ll burn as we fall
Fall like stars
Shadows of ourselves
Lost where we are
There’s ghosts in my past
And nightmares now
We’ll burn as we fall
I’m not saved anyhow

I got death at my door
Pain in my heart
I don’t know why I keep returning

I’ll find my way home
I swear that someday
I’ll find out why you’re so forgiving

We’ll burn as we fall
Fall like stars
Shadows of ourselves
Lost where we are

We’ll burn as we fall
Fall like stars
I found the piece that’s missing
It was never very far
©2007-2009 ~Vixens-Shadow
:iconvixens-shadow:

Author's Comments

I'm putting this as a Poetry, spoken word because, well, there's really no place on DevArt for songs, huh?

Anyway, this is another lil tidbit for Redemption. Another piece for Starscream, actually. Kinda like, well, telling some of a story but not quite. I don't know.

I actually made a basic recording of this. Nothing fancy, nothing special. No instruments. All I own is a Saxophone and it's sound didn't feel right for the song. That and I can't post the song on the net...got no where to do that.

Love it, hate it, luke warm about it, lemme know, k?

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:icondyn-:
*claps* Well done...

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:star-empty: :invisible: ~Dyn- :invisible: :star-empty:
:iconvixens-shadow:
Wow. You're quick! lol

Thank you :) I'm happy that you liked it. I can't remember the last time I actually tried writing a song.

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"Vixen" The Scion xB. Aerodynamically challenged since 2006.
:icongarvis:
Actually, you could... You could upload audio files in Sheezyart. I uploaded an audio file myself on Sheezyart, I uploaded something called "Shiggen's Mom's Laugh". It stinks, but it was original. And you can also try [link] to put your song available for download.

As for the song itself, it's nice. It's like a neverending stairwell that is quite painful to traverse (as in going through life), but if you stop, you're good as dead anyway.

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Katherine: You know, I'm curious about something. I know my reasons for wanting to keep Pam and Bobby apart. But what I really don't understand are yours.
J.R.: Well, I have a very special feeling for your sister. I hate her.
:icondyn-:
Well, I found it quite well done...

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:star-empty: :invisible: ~Dyn- :invisible: :star-empty:
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:iconvixens-shadow:
Well, thank you again :D I was feeling quite nervous about posting this but I'm glad I did :)

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"Vixen" The Scion xB. Aerodynamically challenged since 2006.
:icongarvis:
I did read it (twice in fact), but that's how I interpret it.

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Katherine: You know, I'm curious about something. I know my reasons for wanting to keep Pam and Bobby apart. But what I really don't understand are yours.
J.R.: Well, I have a very special feeling for your sister. I hate her.
:icongarvis:
(Edit): Whoops. Sorry, I meant I read the poem twice, not Redemption.

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Katherine: You know, I'm curious about something. I know my reasons for wanting to keep Pam and Bobby apart. But what I really don't understand are yours.
J.R.: Well, I have a very special feeling for your sister. I hate her.
:iconwyntir-rose:
Wow. Just wow.

It's incredibly deep and it fits Redemption beautifully. ... I think I can hear an alto sax playing a tune for this. It's an instument that can be mournful (like in the Dance in Miss Saigon). But maybe piano and oboe might be a better choice .. or even better, a shamissen (sp?). ... Yeah, I'm rambling.

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